diff --git a/SPOILERS_TODO b/SPOILERS_TODO index 9e2ec09..f378b5d 100644 --- a/SPOILERS_TODO +++ b/SPOILERS_TODO @@ -1,3 +1,2 @@ * background and text colours should reflect the scene -* maybe Mute streams from an office building, not her home? * style the thing: serif font, blockquotes etc. diff --git a/src/intro/02.twee b/src/intro/02.twee index 50fc7ef..ed59bbb 100644 --- a/src/intro/02.twee +++ b/src/intro/02.twee @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -My "studio" is what previously was the bedroom in my single-bedroom apartment. +My "studio" is a small office space downtown that took some time renovating. \ To make a long story short, what I do is Truman show, except with less \ product placement and more ladies, erotically bound in different ways. \ The cameras are always on and the video feed doesn't stop. diff --git a/src/intro/03.twee b/src/intro/03.twee index 4761f86..bb08232 100644 --- a/src/intro/03.twee +++ b/src/intro/03.twee @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ The slight problem with being me is the whole lot, but the relevant one is, \ are some sounds: sucking on a gag, horseshoe clacking, chain rustling, I don't \ know, excited breathing. But still, no moans. People like moans. -That was part of a justification for a large TV being in my room with some +That was part of a justification for a large TV hanging on a wall with some \ copyright-free porn on it all the time. The other part is it's quirky, adds to \ a unique setting. The other other part is maybe I really like my job sometimes, \ all right? diff --git a/src/intro/06.twee b/src/intro/06.twee index 7ff19cb..e4420e7 100644 --- a/src/intro/06.twee +++ b/src/intro/06.twee @@ -7,9 +7,9 @@ I hope the door iS NOT LOCKED breathe don't panic press on the handle, kick \ the door YES I'M OUT good now what the elevator is dead I guess use the stairs \ fuck another door -- open -- good FUCKING FIFTEENTH FLOOR ARE YOU SHITTING ME \ thank fuck there are emergency lighs one step at a time don't run don't fucking -\ FALL that would be very bad indeed good one down fuckton to go ignore the -\ screaming let others pass one step at a time don't run don't... actually do, -\ let's focus on my embarrasing attire for now. +\ FALL that would be very bad indeed good one down fuckton to go at least there's +\ nobody in the building at this time of day I hope one step at a time don't run +\ don't... actually do, let's focus on my embarrasing attire for now. What do I do when (not if) people stare at me in disbelief and shock? Scratch \ shock they have something much bigger to be shocked about. What is it?